Original Version:

Okay, um, so there is a woman getting ready to go out for the night. She's gonna go to a bar with her friends. And she's really excited because it's like a bar and an eatery. And we're going to drink and they're going to eat all this food and it's going to be so fun and it's our first time going out in like, a month. So she's getting ready. You know she's brushing her hair, maybe like curling is doing her makeup, and she's so excited. Um, and then she gets there, and all of her friends are there and they're all chatting and having a good time when suddenly she's a writer. Let's say she's a writer, right? So she she was she was writing something before she went out. But then, you know, she was getting ready, but then and she's been facing writer's block this whole time. So she was really stressed but now she went out with her friends, but right as she arrives to this dinner, and drinks that she was so excited for, she suddenly gets an idea for this amazing story and she can finally continue writing. And she's been stuck for so long. So she has to choose between writing her story which she has been waiting so long to get good ideas for said she could finally finish her dream of writing a really top number one best selling book, New York Times best seller type book, just to choose between that and eating dinner with all her besties um, and so she gets there and they're all waiting for they're like, Hey, girl, what's up? And she's like, Oh my god. I'm so sorry. I have to go. And so she's about to run out of the restaurant or bar thing. But then one of her friends like girl we have what's wrong? And she's like, I suddenly I have this great idea. But and I need to write it down. You know, I've been stuck in my career and I really want to get somewhere and it sucks that I have to choose between doing great things in this book and seeing you guys all the time, but I got to do it. And the girls like hold up, hold up girly. Let me help you out. And she whips out her laptop. She had her laptop on her the whole time because she just came from her job. So she's got our work laptop out and she's like, Listen, you get to tell us this juicy story idea as you write it down. And then we'll help you edit it like as you're doing it. And so instead of having to choose she gets to write and hang out with your besties and have tasty food and drinks. So she's living the life and she's like, I didn't have to choose all along. This is amazing. I can write this book. I'm on this crappy work laptop and I can hang out with my besties so worth so it's a good thing that I went out tonight instead of just saying in Oh my god. Yeah, moral of the story. I don't know. But

Second Version:

Okay, so there is a woman getting ready to go out for the night. She's gonna go to a bar with her friends, and she's really excited because it's both a bar and an eatery. They're going to drink and they're going to eat all this food and it's going to be so fun and it's their first time going out in like a month, so she's getting ready. She's brushing her hair, maybe curling it and doing her makeup, and she's so excited. Then she gets there, and all of her friends are there and they're all chatting and having a good time when suddenly she's a writer. Let's say she's a writer, right? She was writing something before she went out. She was getting ready, and she's been facing writer's block this whole time. So she was really stressed but she went out with her friends, but right as she arrives to dinner and drinks that she was so excited for, she suddenly gets an idea for an amazing story and she can finally continue writing. She's been stuck for so long, so she has to choose between writing her story which she has been waiting so long to get good ideas for so she could finally finish her dream of writing a really top number one best selling book, New York Times best seller type book, just to choose between that and eating dinner with all her besties. She gets there and they're all waiting for her like, “Hey, girl, what's up?” And she's like, “Oh my god. I'm so sorry. I have to go.” And so she's about to run out of the restaurant or bar thing. But then one of her friends is like, “girl what's wrong?” And she's like, “I suddenly have this great idea, and I need to write it down. You know, I've been stuck in my career and I really want to get somewhere and it sucks that I have to choose between doing great things in this book and seeing you guys all the time, but I have to do it.” And the girl’s like, “hold up, hold up girly. Let me help you out,” and she whips out her laptop. She had her laptop on her the whole time because she just came from her job. So she's got her work laptop out and she's like, “Listen, you get to tell us this juicy story idea as you write it down, and then we'll help you edit it as you're doing it.” And so instead of having to choose she gets to write and hang out with her besties and have tasty food and drinks. So she's living the life and she's thinking, “I didn't have to choose all along. This is amazing. I can write this book. I'm on this crappy work laptop and I can hang out with my besties. This is so worth it, so it's a good thing that I went out tonight instead of just staying in.”

Third Version:

Okay, so there is a woman getting ready to go out for the night. She's gonna go to a bar with her friends, and she's really excited because it's both a bar and an eatery. They're going to drink and they're going to eat all this food and it's going to be so fun and it's their first time going out in like a month, so she's getting ready. She's brushing her hair, maybe curling it and doing her makeup, and she's so excited. Then she gets there, and all of her friends are there and they're all chatting and having a good time when suddenly she's a writer. Let's say she's a writer, right? She was writing something before she went out. She was getting ready, and she's been facing writer's block this whole time. So she was really stressed but she went out with her friends, but right as she arrives to dinner and drinks that she was so excited for, she suddenly gets an idea for an amazing story and she can finally continue writing. She's been stuck for so long, so she has to choose between writing her story which she has been waiting so long to get good ideas for so she could finally finish her dream of writing a really top number one best selling book, New York Times best seller type book, just to choose between that and eating dinner with all her besties. She gets there and they're all waiting for her like, “Hey, girl, what's up?” And she's like, “Oh my god. I'm so sorry. I have to go.” And so she's about to run out of the restaurant or bar thing. But then one of her friends is like, “girl what's wrong?” And she's like, “I suddenly have this great idea, and I need to write it down. You know, I've been stuck in my career and I really want to get somewhere and it sucks that I have to choose between doing great things in this book and seeing you guys all the time, but I have to do it.” And the girl’s like, “hold up, hold up girly. Let me help you out,” and she whips out her laptop. She had her laptop on her the whole time because she just came from her job. So she's got her work laptop out and she's like, “Listen, you get to tell us this juicy story idea as you write it down, and then we'll help you edit it as you're doing it.” And so instead of having to choose she gets to write and hang out with her besties and have tasty food and drinks. So she's living the life and she's thinking, “I didn't have to choose all along. This is amazing. I can write this book. I'm on this crappy work laptop and I can hang out with my besties. This is so worth it, so it's a good thing that I went out tonight instead of just staying in.”